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	<title>Comments on: Writing homework</title>
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	<description>Welcome to Year 6 at Woodfield Primary</description>
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		<title>By: Rachel Orrell</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1070</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rachel Orrell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Mar 2017 18:05:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The ferocious beast`s jaws screeched because he  was hungry. His dry, rocky skin protects him from predators.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The ferocious beast`s jaws screeched because he  was hungry. His dry, rocky skin protects him from predators.</p>
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		<title>By: Mrs Fairhurst</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1062</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mrs Fairhurst]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Mar 2017 20:15:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Wow, great adjectives and powerful verbs.  I love your use of coiffed!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, great adjectives and powerful verbs.  I love your use of coiffed!</p>
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		<title>By: Emily richardson</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1061</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Emily richardson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Mar 2017 16:42:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The furious, fire breathing dragon made me jump so high I nearly landed on the rocky moon!

His spiky red and yellow claws made a massive hole in my brand new t shirt.

His fat, furry belly was as bouncy as a bouncy ball. 

The smelly, wet saliva dripped slowly onto my beautiful coiffed, curly hair.

His Mohican was as spiky as a punk rocker.

My body shook from the forceful power of his piercing, small, red eyes!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The furious, fire breathing dragon made me jump so high I nearly landed on the rocky moon!</p>
<p>His spiky red and yellow claws made a massive hole in my brand new t shirt.</p>
<p>His fat, furry belly was as bouncy as a bouncy ball. </p>
<p>The smelly, wet saliva dripped slowly onto my beautiful coiffed, curly hair.</p>
<p>His Mohican was as spiky as a punk rocker.</p>
<p>My body shook from the forceful power of his piercing, small, red eyes!</p>
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		<title>By: Mrs Fairhurst</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1060</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mrs Fairhurst]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Mar 2017 22:05:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am Holly, he sounds scary!  Good use of fronted adverbials!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am Holly, he sounds scary!  Good use of fronted adverbials!</p>
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		<title>By: Mrs Fairhurst</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1059</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mrs Fairhurst]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Mar 2017 22:04:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Good use of the possessive apostrophe Bethany!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good use of the possessive apostrophe Bethany!</p>
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		<title>By: Bethany Jones</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1057</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Bethany Jones]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Mar 2017 20:17:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The  fierce ,scary  dragon  had  a  twelve  foot  tail  with 12  spikes  and  slimy scales.  His  boisterous  eyes  were  as  dark  as  coal  and  very  terrifying.  It has  a  disgusting,  purple  belly  and it  rumbles  like  a  giant  shouting!

His  hairy,  pink  legs are  as  hot  as  California  and  as  scary  as  a  shark.

He  has  arms  as  big  as  a  monster  and  is as  hairy  as  a  sheep&#039;s  fur.

He  had  green  laser  sharp  teeth  and  could  chew  a  human  in  one  bite  so watch  out!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The  fierce ,scary  dragon  had  a  twelve  foot  tail  with 12  spikes  and  slimy scales.  His  boisterous  eyes  were  as  dark  as  coal  and  very  terrifying.  It has  a  disgusting,  purple  belly  and it  rumbles  like  a  giant  shouting!</p>
<p>His  hairy,  pink  legs are  as  hot  as  California  and  as  scary  as  a  shark.</p>
<p>He  has  arms  as  big  as  a  monster  and  is as  hairy  as  a  sheep&#8217;s  fur.</p>
<p>He  had  green  laser  sharp  teeth  and  could  chew  a  human  in  one  bite  so watch  out!</p>
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		<title>By: Holly Smith</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1056</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Holly Smith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Mar 2017 12:00:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Worryingly, this monster is the size of my house!

This monster has a blood red tongue as long as a lizard.

This beastly monster has claws as sharp as knives, and teeth like daggers to scare all his enemies away.

Amazingly, I am not scared of this monster!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Worryingly, this monster is the size of my house!</p>
<p>This monster has a blood red tongue as long as a lizard.</p>
<p>This beastly monster has claws as sharp as knives, and teeth like daggers to scare all his enemies away.</p>
<p>Amazingly, I am not scared of this monster!</p>
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		<title>By: Mrs Fairhurst</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1051</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mrs Fairhurst]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Mar 2017 20:05:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great description Josie, I love your fronted adverbial.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great description Josie, I love your fronted adverbial.</p>
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		<title>By: Mrs Fairhurst</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1050</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mrs Fairhurst]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Mar 2017 20:03:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I hope I don&#039;t meet him too April!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hope I don&#8217;t meet him too April!</p>
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		<title>By: Mrs Fairhurst</title>
		<link>http://cohort2013.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2017/03/10/623/#comment-1049</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mrs Fairhurst]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Mar 2017 20:03:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great similes Brooke!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great similes Brooke!</p>
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